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To Catch A Falling Star by *ahmose:iconahmose:



Last night I dreamed of falling
Through mist and memory
I felt you calling-
The wishes of your soul
Brought me towards the edge
To see if I could make you whole.

Last night I dreamed of racing
Through blackened earth
I felt your heart aching-
The lonely tears you've cried
Brought me to the edge
Your light my only guide.

Last night I dreamed of finding
The bliss my light has sought
Our souls forever binding-
The love we made
Brought me over the edge
Never was I so afraid.

Last night I dreamed of falling
Through mist and memory
I felt you calling-
Your scent a fragrant rose
Through tear-stained bliss
I found you beneath our willows.

Together we sought
That love so pure-
Now your star is ever caught
And together we shall endure.
©2004-2009 *ahmose
:iconahmose:

Author's Comments

Came to me today, and something told me to not fight it back like usual, so i didn't. :shrug:

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:icontimfowler:
I don't really like the poem but I quite like the ideas and the structure.
:iconahmose:
thank you for your honesty, i appreciate it. :)

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Aspire to be yourself.
:iconaishiteruaijin:
::applaudes:: I will admit, it wasn't the best I've read from you but never the less, it was written well. I enjoyed it. :hug:

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"Damnant quod non intellegunt." - Horace
(Latin for: "They condemn what they do not understand")

"It comes down to two possibilities: He'll realize you're worth it, or you'll realize he isn't."
:iconahmose:
i didn't think it was my best either, but poetry also isn't my best form. But hey, you know how it is, when your muse wacks u upside the head with a sledge hammer of inspiration, you can't help but pay attention! lol and thank you :hug:

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Aspire to be yourself.
:iconuxorious:
sad and good, very good, oh my...very very very good :clap:
:iconahmose:
:blush: thanks

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Aspire to be yourself.
:iconaishiteruaijin:
Yes, I know how it is...sometimes I hate it when it happens. But sometimes I don't, kinda depends on how I feel. Poetry really isn't my form either, but for some reason that's all I've come up with lately. :Shrug: But hey, it works.
:hug:Autumn

--
"Damnant quod non intellegunt." - Horace
(Latin for: "They condemn what they do not understand")

"It comes down to two possibilities: He'll realize you're worth it, or you'll realize he isn't."
:iconahmose:
yep, whatever works right ? :D :hug:

--
Aspire to be yourself.

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