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Souls can flicker as well as any flame
Burning-fading-dancing-sighing
They exist and live by a rhythm
Life is rhythm and it is ever changing
Breaking-accelerating-halting-pounding
Let the rhythm move you
Let it break you and rebuild you
Triumph-pain-caution-regret
In every action bleeds a scar
Some fade and some light the way
Our eyes carry the flame
Our hearts bear the scars
Life-death-love-loss

I am breaking and I am afraid
This rhythm stretches and tears
The scars won't fade anymore
Memories cut them anew
My only absolution...
...every soul flickers.
©2008-2009 *ahmose
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Stream of consciousness poetry. Yeah....

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:iconluckylisa:
wow simply amazing! i love the words you used... very strong emotions. some i've felt for a long time. nicely done hun!
:iconahmose:
Thank you! And for the fave as well :)

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Thank you :)

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rawr

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